I think I just pulled something from laughing so much

[boodie]

Oh dear god, you HAVE to read this, Sailor Jim describes the difficulty in writing erotically about penises.

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[bobbain.livejournal.com]

"She stood and walked languorously into the bathroom, stepped into the bath and put her arms around him from behind, pressing her body against him and moving her hands deliciously over the front of his body. 'Ah, cherie,' he sighed as he made to turn to her but she whispered 'no' and continued her sensual movement of hands and body. She ran her hand down to his groin and enclosed his already swollen throbbing penis. She caressed and pulled at it, teasing it bigger, smiling at her own power. She stood on the sides of the bath, her breasts heavy on his shoulders, legs apart, knees embracing him as she stroked up and down his back with her open pubis, tongue in his ear. He turned his mouth to meet hers and they kissed deeply, water spraying their heads. 'Let me turn round?" he whispered."

Anne Hawking from Murder Seventies Style "The Final Dismissal" ISBN 1 876075 Copyright Anne Hawking 1996 (Page 98)

From Anne to me 1996 "I sent you a postcard a couple of weeks ago from The Entrance, but, thinking about it after, I'm almost sure I forgot to put a stamp on, so you might not get it. It's the thought" Regards Anne.

Anne (Hawking) was a long time contributor to the now defunct Paragon Bulletin Board. The book referred to above was her first (of two) books both of which are available.

Available at Amazon.com (two volume paperback)

Murder Sixties Style / Seventies Style - Amazon.com

[funnelwebkitten.livejournal.com]

Nicely written, which makes a change, most authors do not do sex scenes very well at all.