I have this problem with being verbose, especially in things like essays and when I'm writing, like this story i'm currently writing, it just keepx getting longer and longer..
allitteration and verbosity are no bad things, just when they get in the way of a good story.. and I have yet to see something that you have written where it has..
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Date: 2002-06-25 06:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2002-06-25 07:26 am (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2002-06-26 11:33 am (UTC)Much better than being way too brief.